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god i am a hypocrite by ~sagebirt:iconsagebirt:



it is so tempting i know
to rhyme and to flow
but i really dont want to anymore
as it makes me sick
when i find these cuddled words
that tease and click

GOD I AM A HYPOCRITE!

i passed on the feelings that i hid
from the world
whatever that is
just a few people
who cannot escape my grip
it is hopeless i admit
that these words just kind of fit
into the brackets
of this sarcasm laden wit
which was born when puberty hit
and knocked me to the floor
making me see more
of this broken down soul
that i never thought should exist

GOD I AM YOUR HYPOCRITE!
©2006-2009 ~sagebirt
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Excellent!!

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Beautiful things happen naturally
morning!

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If i meet a pretty lady then there is only one thing i would say to her

i have a 9 inch tongue and i can breath through my ears!
wow.... :wow: amazing, your very talented!!!!!! and what do you mean, im a anger little minx?

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Stay strong.
i meant no offense you just seem a bit fiesty thats all

i like that!!!

you describe yourself as emotional after all

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If i meet a pretty lady then there is only one thing i would say to her

i have a 9 inch tongue and i can breath through my ears!
im fiesty? okay.. well maybe, but thats only with friends when were outside exploring dirt roads, and new places!!!

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Stay strong.
lol sounds like fun

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If i meet a pretty lady then there is only one thing i would say to her

i have a 9 inch tongue and i can breath through my ears!
it is!!!! but not when we stubble upon places that frek us out!!!!! and start jumping over fences and me ripping my pants from behind, also, trying hard not to get in trouble by the people there by jumping ovber fences, and being in places were not supposed to be in. lol, were like that. :D you have a nice day too, and you used to do that?

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Stay strong.
did i used to do that? no i was a good little boy (winks)

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If i meet a pretty lady then there is only one thing i would say to her

i have a 9 inch tongue and i can breath through my ears!

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